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the Love Song by =heartofwings:iconheartofwings:

Categories Traditional Art > Drawings > Animals

©2009-2010 =heartofwings
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This was a little fun to play with :]

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:icontigerstarcatcher:
*TigerStarcatcher Apr 17, 2009, 9:46:22 AM
What drew me to this piece at first was the bright shades of pink and the shading of the flamingo's feathers. You do a nice job of shading and defining borders without using an outline. It also looks like you used a good quality paper for this work. Often colors and shading show up better on a paper that has a "tooth" to it.

What detracts from this work is the thick CG border frame. In contrast, the frame looks like it was generated in little to no time at all and actually takes away from the drawing.

If you reduced the border some and made the central work of the flamingo larger, this would be a much better work. :)
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*OctoberAzriel Apr 14, 2009, 6:29:04 PM
It's pretty.:)

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"Here's our only conversation we've ever had without using our words to show. And our love is a creation of all the things that
have ever had a chance to grow."
Charades - Stephen Jerzak
:iconheartofwings:
=heartofwings Apr 14, 2009, 6:35:31 PM
Thanks :}

--

"When you are lonely,
I'll be lonely too.
And this is the fame. "
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*OctoberAzriel Apr 14, 2009, 6:37:32 PM
You're always welcome Sara.:hug:

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"Here's our only conversation we've ever had without using our words to show. And our love is a creation of all the things that
have ever had a chance to grow."
Charades - Stephen Jerzak
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~UnbearableBurden Apr 14, 2009, 6:39:35 PM
Snazzy
Did you use paints or pastels or pencils?

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The past is the present, the present is the future, and the future just fanished.
Hidden by Owner
:iconchocolatemuack:
~chocolatemuack Apr 14, 2009, 6:41:24 PM
love it! :heart:

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*..:: Life isn't about finding yourself. Life is about CREATING YOURSELF ::..*
:iconheartofwings:
=heartofwings Apr 14, 2009, 6:42:01 PM
:iconheartgiggle:

--

"When you are lonely,
I'll be lonely too.
And this is the fame. "
:iconoctoberazriel:
*OctoberAzriel Apr 14, 2009, 6:43:07 PM
:iconcuddleplz:

--
"Here's our only conversation we've ever had without using our words to show. And our love is a creation of all the things that
have ever had a chance to grow."
Charades - Stephen Jerzak
:iconheartofwings:
=heartofwings Apr 14, 2009, 6:43:16 PM
Hhaa. Sorry I replied to the wrong comment. :ohmygod:
Colored pencils XD

--

"When you are lonely,
I'll be lonely too.
And this is the fame. "
:iconheartofwings:
=heartofwings Apr 14, 2009, 6:43:48 PM
Thank you!

--

"When you are lonely,
I'll be lonely too.
And this is the fame. "
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