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This was a little fun to play with :]

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:icontigerstarcatcher:
What drew me to this piece at first was the bright shades of pink and the shading of the flamingo's feathers. You do a nice job of shading and defining borders without using an outline. It also looks like you used a good quality paper for this work. Often colors and shading show up better on a paper that has a "tooth" to it.

What detracts from this work is the thick CG border frame. In contrast, the frame looks like it was generated in little to no time at all and actually takes away from the drawing.

If you reduced the border some and made the central work of the flamingo larger, this would be a much better work. :)
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:iconoctoberazriel:
It's pretty.:)

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Thanks :}

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You're always welcome Sara.:hug:

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Snazzy
Did you use paints or pastels or pencils?

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love it! :heart:

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:iconheartgiggle:

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I'll be lonely too.
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:iconoctoberazriel:
:iconcuddleplz:

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"Here's our only conversation we've ever had without using our words to show. And our love is a creation of all the things that
have ever had a chance to grow."

Charades - Stephen Jerzak
:iconheartofwings:
Hhaa. Sorry I replied to the wrong comment. :ohmygod:
Colored pencils XD

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"When you are lonely,
I'll be lonely too.
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Thank you!

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"When you are lonely,
I'll be lonely too.
And this is the fame. "

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